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Latest Draft Audience Feedback Update 

We have now implemented our mask shots that we filmed in The Pergola and alleyway and have boosted the narrative structure significantly. However it was suggested by the audience that we should show more representation of the night as our all our shots were primarily taken during the day, although our studio shots may come across as being filmed in the night due to the very dark mise en scene. 

We have drawn up some ideas of how we could do this, such as showing him asleep in bed but in a surreal way. We have thought of some ways we could do this such as showing him tossing and turning in bed restlessly, which is also mentioned in the lyrics of the song.  

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